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Submitted: July 23, 2011
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flootershyby ~two-for-flinching

Fan Art / Cartoons & Comics / Digital / Movies & TV

played with this on and off when i wasn't doing work for work. <3

Critique by *47ness Jul 23, 2011, 11:40:33 PM

B'aww you still want a critique...? ;X
I'll. try.

Something that feels like it could be improved is how her tail rolls into her rear, that is, it needs to bunch up more at the base.

The other thing that feels off is Angel doesn't have enough cast shadow in comparison to Flootershy. Or any occlusion where his body meets the ground. If I just squint my eyes he pretty much blends right into the BG while Flutter still pops, so there's something a bit inconsistent thar.

That's about it really; there's other tiny, tiny nitpicks like her wingtips could be more feather-like (fff, like MLP pegasus anatomy is supposed to be accurate XD) and her front shoulder could be better defined. But really, none of those issues takes away from the emotional impact of this. NONE. :3

Probably if you submitted work like this in a studio setting, the art director would tell you this and make you fix it, but really it means you're competent to keep going. ;D

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~Pandalaimon Jun 4, 2013

le squee :{D

~ayame-maiden Apr 27, 2013 Hobbyist Traditional Artist

So cute!

~IAmtheCheese-Lovve Feb 16, 2013 Student Traditional Artist

<su>You should make this a print, id sure buy it<3 ;;

=Citron--Vert Feb 15, 2013 Hobbyist General Artist

I feature your wonderful deviation here [link]

~JudgeDeadd Jan 2, 2013

I love how this shows her character. The lighting and the shadows look excellent and expert. The color scheme is really pleasant too, like an eye massage.
(But her legs look weird... are they supposed to bend like that?)

~two-for-flinching Jan 2, 2013

thanksss!

yeahhh looking at the legs now, i could've done WAY better.
maybe i'll re-draw this sometime in the future... see if i've gotten
any better sinse