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flootershy by two-for-flinching flootershy by two-for-flinching
played with this on and off when i wasn't doing work for work. <3
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B'aww you still want a critique...? ;X
I'll. try.

Something that feels like it could be improved is how her tail rolls into her rear, that is, it needs to bunch up more at the base.

The other thing that feels off is Angel doesn't have enough cast shadow in comparison to Flootershy. Or any occlusion where his body meets the ground. If I just squint my eyes he pretty much blends right into the BG while Flutter still pops, so there's something a bit inconsistent thar.

That's about it really; there's other tiny, tiny nitpicks like her wingtips could be more feather-like (fff, like MLP pegasus anatomy is supposed to be accurate XD) and her front shoulder could be better defined. But really, none of those issues takes away from the emotional impact of this. NONE. :3

Probably if you submitted work like this in a studio setting, the art director would tell you this and make you fix it, but really it means you're competent to keep going. ;D
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MLPegasis4898 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aw!!! It's so cute and lovely!!! :aww: :aww: :aww:
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DarthWill3 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
How sweet!
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starcat233 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Student Digital Artist
This is so awesome! I love the details! <3 ;D
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:iconbakameganekko:
BakaMeganekko Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Student Digital Artist
This is absolutely beautiful!!!!! :wow:
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:iconblazah99:
blazah99 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013
nicely done.
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:iconsomercet:
somercet Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013
Gorgeous.
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:iconpandalaimon:
Pandalaimon Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013
le squee :{D
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:iconayame-maiden:
ayame-maiden Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
So cute!
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IAmtheCheese-Lovve Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
<su>You should make this a print, id sure buy it<3 ;;
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Citron--Vert Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I feature your wonderful deviation here [link]
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JudgeDeadd Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
I love how this shows her character. The lighting and the shadows look excellent and expert. The color scheme is really pleasant too, like an eye massage.
(But her legs look weird... are they supposed to bend like that?)
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two-for-flinching Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
thanksss!

yeahhh looking at the legs now, i could've done WAY better.
maybe i'll re-draw this sometime in the future... see if i've gotten
any better sinse
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pokeblahss1324 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012
awwwhhh, soo cute, beautiful picture
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willorrin Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
D'awwww
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McLarenMP4-27 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2012
Looks so cute. Very Disney-ish.
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:iconsweetgeeky:
SweetGeeky Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Student Digital Artist
The colour composition in this is fantastic. What a wonderful piece! :D Thank you for taking the time to make it!
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two-for-flinching Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012
awwh, youre so sweet! thank you!
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SweetGeeky Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Student Digital Artist
You're more than welcome~ :hug:
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:icondocwario:
DocWario Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012
that's not pink, that's orange! yer' tryin to trick my eyes...

beautiful, btw
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:icontwo-for-flinching:
two-for-flinching Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012
yeah it is ahahaa

i used yellow and whatever for the hi-lighted parts because white or just going lighter makes everything look flat - 3-
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supermeneer Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012
This is kinda Disney-like. I love it!
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:iconwinddrifter:
WindDrifter Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012  Student General Artist
I like the leaf shadow details. Very nice
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:iconyayaoo:
YaYaOo Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
awesome pic!
which program have you used?? :D
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two-for-flinching Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012
imagination.exe





also photoshop
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:iconjrrhack:
jrrhack Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Overall and lighting its just so... awesome. I could never make black contour work for me yours awesome.
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:iconangeliiy:
angeliIy Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2012   Artist
So cute ouo
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:iconsickly-venom:
SIckly-venOM Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
aww... this seems sad to me after reading "fluttershys lament"
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:icongratlofatic:
Gratlofatic Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So much nostalgia, this is one of the pictures that got me into ponies ^^
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two-for-flinching Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012
oh gosh, really? c':

<33
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:icongratlofatic:
Gratlofatic Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah :3 I started watching around the 29th of July :squee:

Also, I see you live in Canada :D Whereabouts?
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LilDruid Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012
This is the quality of stuff you wouldn't mind framing for your wall.
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:icondecompressor:
decompressor Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Disney pony is win.
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:icondecompressor:
decompressor Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Disney pony is win.
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:iconfriendshipocalypse:
friendshipocalypse Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012
looks like good oldschool disney.
warm and cute
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:iconhelsaabi:
Helsaabi Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012
This is really love! :heart:
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:icontapirgroover:
TapirGroover Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Really! Freaking beautiful!
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flydragon7 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
its so beuotiful
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:iconbat-snake:
Bat-Snake Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
"With a smile and a soooooong"
So her theme music =3 .
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elphieofkiamoko Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
x3 D'awwwwww!! it's so cute!
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1xx1-2 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2011
water, pencil and color: awesome!
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Anomaly9 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Beautiful! The whole atmosphere is like something out of a story book.

The composition is great. I love how Fluttershy is framed by the trees. The shadows from the leaves are really well done and make for nice, interesting patterns.
I also like how you exaggerated her features. Really nice work. :D
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AllHailWeegee Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2011
This picture makes me smile every time I see it. :)
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Berneri Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2011  Student General Artist
must love those shadows. *_*
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drastikhate Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2011
Is that Angel?
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:icontwo-for-flinching:
two-for-flinching Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011
More like Generic Bunny. But it could be, ahaha
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MySweetQueen Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2011
you has been featured! [link]
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:iconcinderberry:
Cinderberry Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2011  Student Digital Artist
I love the deep shading on her hair and tail! Fluttershy's one of my favorites :3
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:iconaisu-isme:
aisu-isme Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011  Student Filmographer
I love the soft texture of this!
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XVanilla-TwilightX Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow thats is turly amazing I love the style
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michiyune10 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
the colors are great!! :D
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